Getaway Plan

Since it's enevitably my turn to post I decided to post out this song I wrote from the top of my head. I really love music and want to become a professional singer one day so I write a LOT of songs. So here's just an example of one, I know you dont know the beat or anything to it but just tell me what you think.

Thanks xo Beezlebub

Come join us on our little getaway plan
Where and when don't matter anymore
We’ll climb aboard somewhere,
And it’ll be just like old times in your mind
And we’ll party,
Every night will be a party.


CHORUS
Are you ready?
Can you taste the freedom on your tongue
Bust out that champagne, can you hear the drums playing
In the freedom of our midst and haste
Doesn’t matter what they say
Because we’re on a get away


Gonna keep driving till the moon and the sun are side-by-side
How much have I drunk?
Does it matter anymore?

Are you ready?
Can you taste the freedom on your tongue
Bust out that champagne, can you hear the drums playing
In the freedom of our midst and haste
Doesn’t matter what they say
Because we’re gonna get away


Lift your arms above your head
Feel the beat of the music
The sand under your feet, the warmth of body heat
It’s all getting to you head
And you don't really care
Because your ready

Ready to get away

Can you taste the freedom on your tongue
Bust out that champagne, can you hear the drums playing
In the midst and haste of our freedom
Doesn’t matter what they say
Because we’re getting away

We’re on a getaway
Driving somewhere far
Until the sun and the moon are side-by-side
And your words don't make sense anymore
We’re on a getaway
We’re on a getaway